fire saftey

 

it was ok to do.   it was not hard just a little confusing.

i learned

 

i learned how to wright persuasive writing

Alma Writing

 Alma is  skipping happily down the road  with snow sprinkling on her hat .

 Alma had the biggest smile on her face . she was swinging her arms happily.

She saw the doll that looked  identical to her . She was so confused but she had a small smile on her face. She tried to open the door but it was looked.so she walked a way then the door 

Opened . 

She walked into the shop and there was the doll that kept moving so she was a little confused. Her head was down, her mouth was crooked and she had frown lines on her forehead. Then the doll was on the shelf and she went to reach for it and then she turned into the doll she was so scared she couldn't move she looked so scared and confused but she could not scream or shout or move.

I have been learning to use descriptive language to describe a character called Alma. I had to write 3 sentences about when she was happy, when she was confused and when she was sad. I did all of this and I am happy with my writing.