Alma is skipping happily down the road with snow sprinkling on her hat .
Alma had the biggest smile on her face . she was swinging her arms happily.
She saw the doll that looked identical to her . She was so confused but she had a small smile on her face. She tried to open the door but it was looked.so she walked a way then the door
Opened .
She walked into the shop and there was the doll that kept moving so she was a little confused. Her head was down, her mouth was crooked and she had frown lines on her forehead. Then the doll was on the shelf and she went to reach for it and then she turned into the doll she was so scared she couldn't move she looked so scared and confused but she could not scream or shout or move.
I have been learning to use descriptive language to describe a character called Alma. I had to write 3 sentences about when she was happy, when she was confused and when she was sad. I did all of this and I am happy with my writing.
Hi Kelly,
ReplyDeleteHope you are all good in your bubble at home!
I enjoyed reading your blog about Alma. It was an interesting wee video and I have liked how you have used wonderful adjectives and descriptive language to describe what she is wearing and how she is feeling. You have completed a really good piece of work. 😀🏆
I look forward to reading some of your work that you create while you are learning from home during lockdown.
Keep up the awesome work!
Tracey - TA